Agreed it had substance. Rambling wasn't a criticism it's just an actual demonstration of the fact that YC aren't measuring pitch ability but simply enthusiasm

Agreed it had substance. Rambling wasn't a criticism it's just an actual demonstration of the fact that YC aren't measuring pitch ability but simply enthusiasm + domain knowledge. Passionate, Smart and Gets Things Done seems to be the key, and the fact that they are willing to release this "prototype pitch" so early is probably a good sign for the kind of startup YC wants (release early, innovate).