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Unfortunately, on first glance, it looks like one of those spam pages used to sell pills — at least, IMO. (Sorry, I just think it might be helpful if you get my
by archagon 12y ago
Unfortunately, on first glance, it looks like one of those spam pages used to sell pills — at least, IMO. (Sorry, I just think it might be helpful if you get my honest first impression.)
Suggestions:
* wider
* less text
* more pictures
* more consistent layout/typography: multiple sections, each with a header and explanatory text
- revorad 12y agoThanks, will try to address those things. Is there any specific element that makes it look spammy to you?
- archagon 12y agoYes, I think it's the narrow width and especially the inconsistent layout. You have a header, then a button, then a bold sentence, then a paragraph, then a box with bold text, then a header, then a paragraph with an image stuck in the middle... it's all over the place. I recommend going for a small number of simple header+paragraph sections.
- revorad 12y agoOk, now I see what you mean. I have a clean new design which looks very professional. Just need to fix a few things and I'll put it up shortly.