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Very minor nitpick: Your usage of "thought out" comes across as stilted and unprofessional. I'm guessing English isn't your native language?
by grumblestumble 12y ago
Very minor nitpick: Your usage of "thought out" comes across as stilted and unprofessional. I'm guessing English isn't your native language?
- anigbrowl 12y agoI disagree. It's an unconventional usage but one that struck me as both deliberate and effective. BTW almost all people in Singapore grow up speaking English, it's the common language of 4 ethnic groups and is used on all signs, government correspondence and so forth.
- wingerlang 12y agoI disagree. I made me re-read the sentence more than once, and I still think it doesn't feel right.
- random_ind_dude 12y agoI feel "well thought-out" would be a better way to phrase it.