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This email may be worth millions of dollars in sales
- fnatalie21 12y agoLots of companies pay a premium for receiving the 'best'. He should put whatever in his email in his normal pitch(website, or whatever), instead of trying to compete against the bottom dwellers of the world
- alttab 12y agoI suppose if the marketing was 100% effective they wouldn't have to answer pre-customer e-mails like this. That said, its always good PR to have the CEO go out and "bump" a typical customer scenario who is almost to the purchase choice.
- alttab 12y agoThis blog post may have been worth millions of dollars in sales for Acme if we knew the actual context. Acme has chosen to provide a better value prop. They use this to justify their additional cost 100 times a day. The CEO noted that the value prop was subjective (does your company value XYZ?), and simply justified the gap. It's not magic, its logic.
- guiseppecalzone 12y agoWould have loved to give the name, but the founder asked not to be named. Sorry about that. It was his email, so I deferred to his judgement.
- click170 12y agoThank you for respecting their choice, though I'm concerned they've done themselves a disservice somewhat by missing out on free publicity, especially for something as glowing as this. If the author of that email reads this I do hope you claim ownership so that I can reward your company with my patronage.
- treehau5 12y agoMaybe Acme is afraid of exploding into too much volume, and not being able to provide that aforementioned exceptional customer service. Maybe they just choose to be humble and let their actions do the talking! Either way, this to me is speaking volumes to the type of company this is, but I do share your desire to know what the name of the company is.
- stangeek 12y agoOr maybe Acme is afraid that FooCorp will refute their argument about a so-called "race to the bottom"... Maybe, just maybe, Acme is lying about "customers [...] switching to Acme in droves "... I am not really impressed when a potential supplier is bad mouthing competition to get ahead of the pack. I would have a hard time trusting them, and being confident that at some stage they wouldn't bad mouth my company if I was no longer a client for XYZ reason later on....
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- gk1 12y agoOne day Pablo Picasso was sketching on a park bench. A woman recognized him as the famous artist, and asked him for a portrait sketch. Picasso flipped to a blank page, looked at the woman for a moment, and with a few strokes of the pencil drew her abstract portrait. The woman looks at the drawing and is ecstatic. As she reaches for it, she asks how much it will cost her. "Five thousand," he says. "Five thousand?! But that drawing took you less than a minute!" Picasso replies, "No, madame, it took a lifetime." * * * The point being: The email is worth nothing; the value is in the person writing the email, and their knowing what to say.
- iandanforth 12y agoThe cognitive dissonance here is striking, "the difference in price is peanuts" vs. "I won't lower my price." How exactly did you find this compelling again?
- aaronem 12y ago"Peanuts" in terms of value to the customer, but not in terms of value to the service provider. There's more than one perspective here.
- Spooky23 12y agoIt's all about scale. Think of it this way -- if you were torn between buying two houses that are approximately the same price, and the owner of one home announced that they were taking the kitchen stove with them, would that make you choose the other home? Most people would say no, because the $500 stove is a really marginal add-on in relation to a home. But at the same time, if you went to Home Depot, bought a new $500 stove, and found out that the free delivery doesn't apply to stoves, you'd be livid over the extra $60 fee.
- nyar 12y ago"We're designed to help improve your'e company's performance in the critical area of XYZ." - your'e - company's If it is worth millions of dollars do a spellcheck.
- gknoy 12y agoYou're right that taking the time to proofread and grammar/spell check is good, but in this particular case the performance is that of your company. Thus, "company's" is correct. :-) The other is probably a typo, which might lend authenticity to it having been actually typed out by the CEO, rather than pasted from an archive.
- stretchwithme 12y agoAuthenticity. That's a great point. It could still be faked authenticity, of course :-)
- guiseppecalzone 12y agoI've heard that misspellings can actually improve the response rate. I'd believe that - felt more personal to me.
- nly 12y agoSeem like pretty vanilla sales tactics to me. Even if choosing the more expensive company was the better investment, this is just rationalisation. Some really good tips (I thought) for selling at a higher price than your competition: http://everyonenegotiates.com/selling-high-price.php http://everyonenegotiates.com/selling-high-price.php
- georgemcbay 12y agoTerrible grammar aside, I don't get it. Perhaps due to the lack of context and purposeful obfuscation for the blog post. If you've already evaluated both offerings and found Acme's to be significantly better independently then this sort of works as a justification for the higher price, but I don't see the part where it shows it is any better than FooCorp's thing. Yeah, sure, a bad transaction will cost you money... how do I know FooCorp's thing is more or less likely to generate a bad transaction? Out of context it reads like "if brand X fails you'll be in deep shit, and we're not brand X, so buy our thing which costs more than brand X's thing". Who says brand X fails more often than brand Y? Maybe it does, maybe it doesn't, but the logic train bumped off the rails a bit in the middle for me.
- cpncrunch 12y agoI do this all the time, and it always works. Just today someone asked for a discount, and I wrote a similar email to this one, explaining why we don't give discounts, our products are great value, etc. I did offer them an extra 1 month trial for free, as they were just starting a new business, and they were very happy with that and will probably become a long-term customer. I think people are just programmed to ask for discounts. However unless there is another product which gives them all the features they want for a lower price, they will almost certainly buy your product even if you don't give them a discount (as long as you're nice about it). The only time I would give a discount is if the person genuinely can't afford it, but that very rarely happens (as my prices are pretty reasonable).
- fijal 12y agoI would like to swap "people" in your sentence for "americans". It's a cultural thing, not a human thing.
- pedrosorio 12y agoIt's actually the opposite: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bargaining#Regional_differences http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bargaining#Regional_differences
- simplemts 12y agoSeriously? Bargaining, or discounts, in this example is very, very common all over the world. I have found Americans do less of it than in most parts of the world, such as China, Turkey, Thailand, Morocco, etc.
- dspillett 12y agoI've assumed that my experience is accurate and that it is more common in rural areas (where ad-hoc/informal barter systems still prevail) and poor areas that see significant numbers of (relatively) richer visitors (i.e. tourists). In the latter case the price starts high (to catch the people who will just pay anyway) then the price goes down, or there is a bait & switch (the bargain item advertised in the window is sold out, could we interest you in this instead?), or both. Perhaps the poster above is conflating "loud, brash, confident tourists bargaining" with "American tourists" - a pair of populations that certainly do intersect though not as much as commonly held stereotypes would suggest.
- nraynaud 12y agoI love it, pure business speak ans number from the hat, zero technical details. Use it when the buyer is boss of the buyer. When the user pays, send screen caps and detailed explanations.
- callesgg 12y agoWell that is what everyone says. The thing is that more money does not equal more value. In "IT" I find that it is actually more common for the best product to be the ones that are in the mid price ranges. Not counting open source stuff ofc.
- dijit 12y agoyes, but sometimes things cost money. for a technical example think of a CDN. sure you can go with Fast.ly and get a pretty ok CDN which is mostly automated and pretty cheap, or cloudflare which is similar. but they leverage systems controlled by other people a little too much, as such they can't be held accountable for networking fuck ups. usually costs are human time related, good customer service means paying your helpdesk staff a living wage and retaining charismatic and talented communicators, rather than running them through a sweatshop and having a high turnover.
- notastartup 12y agoI think I might need to raise prices after reading this.
- stevewepay 12y agoSales 101 is being able to take the conversation away from "price" and change it to "value". 20 years ago, my friend was selling IBM desktops and servers to educational institutes and I learned this from him. There was no way IBM could compete against the prices of those small computer stores, so he had to actively show how buying IBM would save money over the long run, etc. He was a very good salesman so it worked pretty well.
- Kurtz79 12y agoAnd yet, eventually IBM pulled out of the consumer PC business.
- exelius 12y agoThat was a proactive move that turned out quite well for them. They saw that the consumer PC business was going to shrink significantly over the next 10 years, so they sold off while the price was still high. I don't think anyone in their right mind is second guessing IBM's decision to get out of the PC business. In hindsight, it was a great move executed with perfect timing.
- Kurtz79 12y agoCompletely agree. But they took this decision because they saw that the superior quality of their product(which having owned older Thinkpads I can say it's true) wasn't profitable enough when competing with lower cost "good enough" alternatives.
- exelius 12y agoIBM's core strategy is one of technological differentiation through R&D; not price leadership. It's absolutely part of that strategy to exit commoditizing markets (which is why they got out of x86 servers as well) where product differentiation is difficult.
- corny 12y agoIBM used FUD (fear, uncertainty, doubt) to sell computers. Not unlike the sales tactics in this email. The actual positive "value" is only vaguely described. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fear,_uncertainty_and_doubt#Definition http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fear,_uncertainty_and_doubt#Def...
- duckingtest 12y agoYou should also write to the cheaper company. Or was the lesson supposed to be that writing meaningless platitudes like 'race to the bottom' is good marketing? Perhaps it is, but personally, I would feel insulted. There's no worse assumption that cheaper product is worse, especially when it comes to SaaS. What if FooCorp has automated much more than Acme, and even with lower prices actually has both better profits per sale and better functionality? Sure, FooCorp should work on their marketing, but that's in their interest, not yours. A perfect company from the customer's PoV is one that is almost unknown, provides the best value per money unit, and has just enough customers to be alive. Then you have a competitive advantage over competition using popular and expensive solutions.
- miahi 12y agoYes, you can get great service from such companies. But you also take the risk of the company shutting down because they lost 2 customers and it cannot afford to be alive anymore - and then you have the added costs of switching to another (more popular and expensive) solution.
- kubiiii 12y agoRight. The striking thing is that op's decision to choose the more expensive solution is now both confirmed by the fact that the solution was better because more expensive and by the fact that it works. An email from the cheaper company explaining why they were cheaper could have had the exact same effect.
- FooBarWidget 12y ago"Just enough customers to be alive"? Would you really trust a SaaS that is about to lose money and go bankrupt at any time? Furthermore, if the company has just enough customers to be alive then there's a pretty big chance that their founders or employees are working over time in order to keep costs low. They might get sick any time, making the company fall over. Not a sustainable situation. Would you really trust your data with that?
- duckingtest 12y ago
- bpm140 12y ago"You're product/service seems expensive." "As compared to what?" Sales 101.
- hyperliner 12y agoThe best sign I have seen related to this topic is from my mechanic shop: "If you think a good mechanic is expensive, try a bad one!"
- mattmanser 12y agoI've worked in enterprise SASS, salesman know not a lot about their own product, ROIs are plucked from asses and often it's all fibs. Bear in mind I thought our sales guys were great, our product pretty good vs the field. But basing your purchase on an email like this? You're a complete sucker. All that happened was that a salesman just called their bluff. And they were impressed by it!
- UrMomReadsHN 12y agoA good salesman will get you to take a bad or mediocre deal while at the same time convincing you you've gotten a great deal. Always question "facts" thrown out by someone trying to sell you something. "instead of doing a price cut, it may be worth explaining why your product is worth more." This is news?
- gk1 12y agoYou've boiled it down pretty well. As many others have noted, this is a typical angle to take when trying to change the topic from price to value, and this CEO writes this exact email many times per week. I'm surprised the owner of HelloSign doesn't already know this tactic.
- mcv 12y agoGreat mail, but the line "...is one of the most leveraged investments you can make" makes my skin itch.
- TeMPOraL 12y agoIf I got an e-mail like this, I'd most likely go with the competitor. > The FooCorps's of the world have spent a couple decades now in a the race to the bottom and it shows. I have no doubt you can get their product (or a whole raft of others) for a few bucks cheaper than us. AKA. "Our competition suck and it shows." > Our product, Acme, is different. Of course. > Look, FooCorp's customers are switching to Acme in droves because we're investing heavily in great customer service and innovation. Yeah? I'd like to see data that supports it. This is one of the most common blatant lies in marketing (sure, it is true for some specific values of customers, switching and in droves) and I see no reason to trust it at face value; the sole inclusion of this sentence feels like evidence against company quality. The same e-mail could be sent by FooCorp or any other competitor in that space. There's no Acme-product-specific information here, just universal marketing slogans.
- pablosaurus 12y agoYou would make a business decision based on the tone of an email?
- TeMPOraL 12y agoNot solely on that, but of course I would. I actively avoid doing business with people and companies that are dishonest or rude. Tone correlates with consciousness and general human decency.
- hywel 12y agoIt sounds like you don't like that the email is part of the company's marketing. But wouldn't it be crazy if they sent such an email without making it part of their marketing? Also, there is differentiation, and explanation of why that's valuable. "We're designed to help improve your'e company's performance in the critical area of XYZ. The ROI on doing that is enormous." Yes, any competitor could have sent such an email outlining their USP / positioning. But most of them won't, and that's what makes this an excellent example.
- TeMPOraL 12y ago
- juiyout 12y agoA common technique when challenged with lower quote. If OP humors us with the actual context, then it might get more interesting.
- juiyout 12y agoA common technique when challenged with lower quote. If OP humors us with the actual context, then it might get more interesting.
- drdaeman 12y agoMaybe this is due to lack of context, but with all that "designed to improve your company performance in the critical area" and "investing heavily in great customer service and innovation" that email sounds terribly enterpriesey to me. It all could be boiled down to a one-liner in spirit of "Sorry, but we can't offer our services any cheaper. Our prices are indeed higher, but the services are better than competitors and we actually provide more value per price unit. Please, take this into consideration." And maybe that's just my tastes, but negative commenting on competitors with all that "race to the bottom" and "customers are switching in droves" stuff doesn't sound any good to me. Even if competitor is really a complete shit. Just my opinion. I'm not a businessman.
- exelius 12y ago> Just my opinion. I'm not a businessman. It shows :) No offense, but this is an engineer's mindset. Great for building products; terrible for selling them. A businessperson's mindset is "if they don't understand their value proposition well enough to explain it to me, their product likely isn't any better than the competition and they know it." Better still, by explaining your value proposition in terms of a prospective client's problems, you are showing them that 1) you understand their problems 2) your product addresses their problems and 3) that you are committed to a long-term, mutually beneficial business relationship, not just a sale. OP's link is a great example of good business communication. It's obvious that many of the flaws are due to the anonymization; I've written these e-mails before and the main goal is building a business relationship based on trust. If you have built a relationship with your customer, you get a little bit of leeway to badmouth the competition if it's relevant.
- derefr 12y ago> A businessperson's mindset is "if they don't understand their value proposition well enough to explain it to me, their product likely isn't any better than the competition and they know it." You'd think a consequentialist businessman would be more interested in buying good things that go unrecognized/undervalued/un-understood by those who have them for sale. He can use the information asymmetry to make a profit, after all.
- MattBearman 12y agoI've never had anyone ask for discount for my SaaS (BugMuncher), nor has anyone ever complained about the pricing. Should I take this as a sign to put my prices up?
- hyperliner 12y agoCareful there. Read about Netflix: http://www.forbes.com/sites/theyec/2011/12/28/5-business-lessons-from-the-netflix-pricing-debacle/ http://www.forbes.com/sites/theyec/2011/12/28/5-business-les...
- MattBearman 12y agoI've just skimmed that article, but I seem to remember Netflix attempted to force the price hike on current users. I would always grandfather existing users, keeping them at their current price. Hell, I've still got people paying just $10 / month from when I first launched.
- josefresco 12y agoThe only fly in this sales-technique ointment are the customers whom you convince, then in-turn expect the world from you because they chose "value" over "price". When customers pay a premium, their expectations are much higher, and unhappiness can set in if you don't manage these well. This might not be something sales can control, but be careful in the claims you make during the sales process as some customers are listening and will be holding you to your promises.
- robomartin 12y agoThis thread is really interesting. You can see a bunch of engineering types doing their best to slice and dice this from a million logical angles. I would have done the same 20 years ago when I launched my product and went out there to sell it. The difference? I was honest enough to recognize I was going to approach sales as an engineer. I got help in the form of experienced non-engineer sales people tutoring me by going on sales calls with me and doing review sessions after every sales call. The first two quarters sucked. It took me about three months to truly stop thinking as an engineer and another three to optimize my style, delivery and approach. We closed the third quarter with over $600K in sales, most of which I was responsible for. I would eventually hire sales and marketing people so I could devote more time to engineering. I felt it was important to understand the sales process by becoming a sales and marketing person myself (for about two years on and off) before staffing thise positions. I have always been glad I took that approach. We engineers are great about building products but absolutely suck at selling. The letter that is the subject of this thread isn't fantastic. That said, it achieved several things all the engineers on HN are ignoring: - Made a sale! Do not underestimate the importance and power of cash in the bank! - It deprived a competitor of revenue. Every dollar you take away from your competition is a dollar that goes towards potentially taking them out of the race, particularly with low price sellers. - It was compelling enough to take someone who was on the fence and flip him to the point of having him write a blog post about the experience - It probably created a long term believer and evangelist for their brand, product and price model - It confirmed that this tactic works. They can use it with new potential customers, evolve and fine tune it. They might also consider integrating aspects of this message in other marketing efforts. - It revealed that the competitor's low price position is tenuous at best - It started a relationship with a new customer in a very positive tone. If nurtured this could lead to more sales from word of mouth - Because of some of the above their cost of customer aquisition is likely to reduce over time I could probably add to this. The point is that most of the criticism here is misplaced. This letter isn't genius. It doesn't have to be. It only has to be effective. That, it is. I don't expect everyone to get this. In typical engineer/HN fashion this will be sliced, diced and down-voted from a million of irrelevant angles. That's OK. I get it. The interesting thing is, regardless of what is said here, that letter still made a sale and accomplished all I have highlighted and more.