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[learn about this] Middle School Dropout [and how he] codes [a] chat program that foils [the ability of the] NSA [to] spy [on communication]
by cmsmith 12y ago
[learn about this] Middle School Dropout [and how he] codes [a] chat program that foils [the ability of the] NSA [to] spy [on communication]
- laxatives 12y agoWhat's not clear about the title in the first place?
- aric 12y agoIs English your first language? I'm not asking out of disrespect. I'm genuinely curious. The grammar of headlines and titling is often confusing to several non-native speakers. Incomplete sentences and 'news speak' play a vital role in language. For starters, it isn't a mouthful. http://esl.about.com/od/intermediatereading/a/newsheadlines.htm http://esl.about.com/od/intermediatereading/a/newsheadlines.... If you want a complete sentence that's more aligned with the meaning and intent of the original headline, try the following. "[A|This] Middle-School Dropout [Codes|Coded|Is Coding] [A] Chat Program That Foils NSA Spying." The one you wrote has some subtle, imperative differences in meaning. Adding "[the ability of the]" is hypercorrective. And it's verbose. "NSA Spying" is appositive speech; it's perfectly normal and understood.
- zoips 12y agoThe post was a riff on the standard "One weird trick that [does something] discovered by [quirky, unexpected source]" ads you see.