> I currently follow the Firefox pattern/language choice: > [ ] Share performance, usage, hardware and customization data anonymously with the developer to hel

> I currently follow the Firefox pattern/language choice: > [ ] Share performance, usage, hardware and customization data anonymously with the developer to help make ___ better. <<Learn More About Data Collected>> IMO the wording is really important here. If I were to write this section of user preferences, I'd go for something like: ▸ Help improve X Click on which expands the panel: □ Allow collecting anonymized information about the usage of the application. It will be used for <reasons>. Only the following data will be sent to us over encrypted connection: <easy-to-understand list>. <<Learn more>> (I know it's easy to give advice, though, and I don't have my own product on which to test copy ideas yet.)