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Dave hammers the 'tell me the problem' side. Does this pitch do that? EDIT: patio's rewrite seems to nail the problem side pretty hard.
by wensing 17y ago
Dave hammers the 'tell me the problem' side. Does this pitch do that?
EDIT: patio's rewrite seems to nail the problem side pretty hard.
- patio11 17y agoTwo alternatives in 15 seconds. Problem-oriented: Severe weather kills people and breaks things. Our customers entrust their lives and property to Stormpulse. Its us and humanity versus death and destruction. Join our side. Solution-oriented: We made a really cool AJAX/Flash mashup which combines a bunch of publicly available weather data sources. We'd like more money to develop a bunch of awesome features we have in the pipeline. How about it? They're equally true. They're by no means equally effective.
- wiemersl 17y agoThanks again from Matt and I for the feedback. You've made your point loudly and clearly, and we will most definitely tweak accordingly.