A title like this screams: "Pick my example video apart." And the first thing I noticed was the vocals on this was horrible - poppy plosives and screaming frica

A title like this screams: "Pick my example video apart." And the first thing I noticed was the vocals on this was horrible - poppy plosives and screaming fricatives. Use a pop filter to get the plosives under control and a multiband compressor for the fricatives.