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Beginning with an action verb is already a better start. Another possible way to reword could be, "Listen to tracks your favorite musicians love." Side note: w
by hansy 12y ago
Beginning with an action verb is already a better start. Another possible way to reword could be, "Listen to tracks your favorite musicians love."
Side note: what's up with the background moving along with mouse cursor? It was a little distracting at first, but I'm guessing the purpose is to make the site feel like you're browsing through a record store?
- ocolot 12y agoyep, that's precisely the idea! I think I'll remove the parallax to reduce potential distractions. thx for your tagline proposal, I think it is the best up to now!
- pronoiac 12y ago"Listen to your favorite bands' favorite songs"
- ocolot 12y agohey hansy, I just pushed you tagline live, thx for the idea!
- hansy 12y agoAlways happy to help! Keep A/B testing and you'll eventually arrive at the optimum solution. Good luck with the website!