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by l8 12y ago
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- keithpeter 12y agoCan you provide a concrete example of a possible edit? (I'm applying the logic of the article).
- swasheck 12y agoMantel instead of mantle is one that jumped out at me. EDIT: > “Nadella is a repeat befuddler. His first email to employees, sent just after he assumed the CEO mantel on earlier this year, was filled with bombastic and false platitudes:” mantel: a beam, stone, or arch serving as a lintel to support the masonry above a fireplace mantle: a figurative cloak symbolizing preeminence or authority <accepted the mantle of leadership>
- JonnieCache 12y agoIt took me some time to realise that the triangle thing wasn't a quote from the microsoft email.