There is a lot to like about your site and I'm sure a venture like this solves a pain point. However, I wonder if you'd have more luck if you got rid of jargon

There is a lot to like about your site and I'm sure a venture like this solves a pain point. However, I wonder if you'd have more luck if you got rid of jargon like this: Arm your marketing and inside sales teams with leads and information that help them lift conversion rates and increase velocity across the funnel When I read that, I immediately flash back to every negative experience I've had with flashy, used car salespeople-types who are brimming with jargon. If your target market OS startups, you might do better if you wrote the above differently.