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-Design quality is good, but you should re-evaluate that top image. Does a tar-covered hand say "High quality leather" to most people? Not to me, especially bec
by ignostic 12y ago
-Design quality is good, but you should re-evaluate that top image. Does a tar-covered hand say "High quality leather" to most people? Not to me, especially because I can't see the object.
-Headline #1 should tell me what you're doing. Don't assume I know what your deal is about. You could almost switch the first and second.
-CTA is way too far below the fold. I should immediately know what you want me to do. Donate? Subscribe? Drop it beneath "You are about to challange [sic] the status quo".
-Challenge, not "challange". Might want to look over your page for spelling and grammar...
This might be helpful:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r2CbbBLVaPk&feature=kp https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r2CbbBLVaPk&feature=kp