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Very interesting. But I hate this kind of writing. It's way to long and runs in circles to many times for my taste.
by cfontes 12y ago
Very interesting.
But I hate this kind of writing.
It's way to long and runs in circles to many times for my taste.
- prawn 12y agoI have to agree. I'm sure it's great for those with the time, but there was nothing for those wishing to skim through and get an idea of what the game/story is about. I'm interested in this sort of game, but I already have a lot of long-form in my "To Read" bookmark folder, and a stack of books beside the bed as it is.
- barbs 12y agoAn ironically lengthy way of saying "tl;dr".
- prawn 12y agoExcept that if anyone sees this longer explanation, they can realise there are often ways to improve the way they've presented their story and create something to that appeals to a broader range of people. Things like bullet points, pullquotes, images and so on are a bit like an inline TL;DR.
- josephlord 12y ago> It's way to long and runs in circles to many times for my taste. I think the game can play like that too...