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Habits that could make you win
- herghost 12y agoThe consultant's addendum to this is to sit and listen contemplatively when someone learned is speaking, determine through the general response of the room whether this person has broad support / likely knows what they're talking about, and then show supportive body language and speak out in agreement as if you already knew. $2000/day
- spb 12y ago"Leaved" and "loose" are both misused in the text as written.
- trumbitta2 12y agothanks for the feedback, I'm not a native speaker and I wish to improve my english. What would've you used instead of: - "leaved" to state that she went away - "loose" in "... I tend to instantly loose my politically correct self." – This I might know: is "lose" the correct verb?
- stevep98 12y ago"She left", and lose. Left is particularly jarring, because everything else about your post is perfect. I would have bet $$$ you were a native speaker if it wasn't for this. English sucks at irregular verbs - sorry!
- trumbitta2 12y agook, I changed "leaved" with "walked away" and corrected "loose" with "lose" :)
- brianmcc 12y agoMust admit I was quite put off by this assertion: "She cared for my alimentation. Lot’s of cod and healthy food in general. I had my first bag of chips around 10. And that’s also why I remember so much about my first years." Seems a somewhat bold extrapolation.
- trumbitta2 12y agoThe closing assertion is about everything since she was pregnant, till "...around 10" :) Of course it's my interpretation of the facts, but I'm 100% convinced.
- thebouv 12y agoAw man, I ate chips when I was 9, no chance for me now.