In the interest of not writing a 3,000-word essay all at once, I wrote Part 1 about what I see as the first step: analyzing the problem and setting the goals fo

In the interest of not writing a 3,000-word essay all at once, I wrote Part 1 about what I see as the first step: analyzing the problem and setting the goals for a redesign. What would you like more detail on, so I can improve Part 2?