If you're going to correct someone, you should do so correctly. You're missing the word "you" in "I hope you won't mind". You're missing the word "I" in "When

If you're going to correct someone, you should do so correctly. You're missing the word "you" in "I hope you won't mind". You're missing the word "I" in "When I read that". It should be "what computer that chess program could possibly have run on". The "could that" order only works in a question.