Disagree that its well-written. The rambling feel of it was kind of distracting from the point he was trying to make. The anectodes are kind of generic (sister,

Disagree that its well-written. The rambling feel of it was kind of distracting from the point he was trying to make. The anectodes are kind of generic (sister, hawaii), I felt like they were just thrown in there as some kind of "proof"