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I just deleted the comment about the bangs. Really does read awkwardly.
by nicholascarlson 12y ago
I just deleted the comment about the bangs. Really does read awkwardly.
- bshimmin 12y agoI should clarify that I didn't think the article badly written - just not quite in the style I'm used to from a publication like Business Insider. That said, I probably haven't read many other long-form pieces on there. Others here clearly enjoyed the writing style very much!
- mishimin 12y agoYou seem to have a very high opinion of the Business Insider
- diziet 12y agoI enjoyed the piece and it's long form content and flow - some of the descriptions of the people (of people I'd met, people I'd heard of many times and people I'd never known existed) were nice additional things in the story.