I loved the email pitch. Seemed to the point and anyone reading it was clear who you are and what you could do. As Mark Twain said in a letter, "if I had more

I loved the email pitch. Seemed to the point and anyone reading it was clear who you are and what you could do. As Mark Twain said in a letter, "if I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter". Still a long way to go for me but I can see my pitches are becoming better. I happy to start with a long winded sentence now and then gradually cut it down.