Thanks for the specific suggestion on the copy editing. I'll definitely try to make it clearer. Also a good point on the photo. It's about the only "bounce"

Thanks for the specific suggestion on the copy editing. I'll definitely try to make it clearer. Also a good point on the photo. It's about the only "bounce" stock photo I could find... I'll poke around and see if anything else might work, though. Thanks for your suggestions!