I won't give a subjective view, just concrete points. 1. The CTA is to enter an email but then the user is invited to click a register button. Which is it?

I won't give a subjective view, just concrete points. 1. The CTA is to enter an email but then the user is invited to click a register button. Which is it? I would recommend simply having an input box (not a button). You knock one up for free with Mailchimp and embed it. EDIT : Just seen that a box exists to enter a text string but it a) Serves no purpose and b) has nothing to identify it such as a cursor or colour 2. Free Trial/Reach More People is H6. This needs to be H1 or H2 at the least and ideally boxed with text/colour differentiation. 3. Light grey copy text is not ideal. Increase the weight/darkness of the text to increase legibility 4. Main value prop is long-winded The text underneath Social Sharing should be bullet-pointed and immediately clear. I read to the fold and it was still no clear exactly what you offer. Do you manage accounts? Do you provide content? Engage with users on my behalf? 5. Slogan is poorly written "Be above others". << Are you telling me that right now I am below others? As an encapsulation I don't love it - it is opaque and appears poorly written. Edit: Just thought of "Elevate your Engagement". Just an example of a slogan using alliteration and a clear prop. 6. Sharing is inverted You have a grossly disproportionate size of sharing buttons compared to the impact statement. Boxes are tiny but the statement is massive. I hope this helps. Typed for brevity so please excuse if it sounds harsh.