Sure, why not. I'm not a designer or part of your target audience, I'm just a heavy internet user and HN reader saying what I think as I go. 1. Requires 1200

Sure, why not. I'm not a designer or part of your target audience, I'm just a heavy internet user and HN reader saying what I think as I go. 1. Requires 1200 px width to render properly. Not everyone maximizes their browser. Needlessly breaking the header into two lines when there is plenty of space to spare seems odd. (I tested in mobile, and it doesn't have this problem in mobile... OK, it does wrap to two lines, but I expect wrapping on mobile. Oddly, I think every aspect of your site looks better on mobile.) 2. Wait, who are you? I think you should have at least a picture and your name as part of the header content. 3. Why is this two columns? How exactly am I supposed to read this? Left column first? Top to bottom? It's almost presented as if it's a table, but it's not. It's two sections of content. Given that this site seems designed to read not scan, it's confusing. (Again, this is better on mobile where it's one column, then the next.) 4. As someone else said, the funnel section should come first. 5. "Configure Google Analytics" does not sound like something I should pay someone to do. I think you can find a better word than configure. Presumably you have some particular skill at using Google Analytics and you aren't just talking about something anyone could do... but "configure Google Analytics" sounds like something anyone could do and it's your first point of what you do. 6. "Want to do it yourself" section should be at the end, maybe?