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What's not constructive about it? He's literally giving sentence by sentence grammatical feedback...I'd be pretty happy to get advice like that.
by sbisker 12y ago
What's not constructive about it? He's literally giving sentence by sentence grammatical feedback...I'd be pretty happy to get advice like that.
- sudhirj 12y agoNormally, yes, but their first language doesn't seem to be English. Might be reason enough to temper things a bit.
- sunir 12y agoI will definitely consider the criticism on tone. However, there can be no slack for English as a second language. They are marketing in English to a market of writers. In any vertical of creatives, you really must outdo your market. They need to get sharp quickly.
- beshrkayali 12y agoDon't want to derail offtopic here, but it's really just in the delivery. It came off a tiny bit pretentious to me.