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Some suggestions: replace "Earn" by "Save" or "Earn __ additional"; replace "~ 80% less" (sounds sloppy) with "up to" or even "about"/"usually"
by darkmighty 13y ago
Some suggestions: replace "Earn" by "Save" or "Earn __ additional"; replace "~ 80% less" (sounds sloppy) with "up to" or even "about"/"usually"