I've avoided making these comments (which I agree with) as I'm coming from a UK based background so I was unclear if this a US style resume thing. It badly nee

I've avoided making these comments (which I agree with) as I'm coming from a UK based background so I was unclear if this a US style resume thing. It badly needs trimming, I found it hard to get a sense of your skills (and which are current) that you want to work with.