3 ms·> Make it relevant, concise, and focused. Like this bloated, scattered, impossible to read slideshow?by j2kun 13y ago> Make it relevant, concise, and focused. Like this bloated, scattered, impossible to read slideshow?j2kun 13y agoHonestly, the more I look at it the more my eyes hurt.tdicola 13y ago84 pages to cover 11 points, insane.