My mistake (noticed when I went back to quote the article), I misread: > What I did have a problem with is the line of men sitting on one bench facing the hoop

My mistake (noticed when I went back to quote the article), I misread: > What I did have a problem with is the line of men sitting on one bench facing the hoopers and gawking at them as > What I did have a problem with is the line of men sitting on one bench facing them, hollering and gawking at them But the point remains. Although it's a bit less in severity than I first realized.