Hopefully the author is reading this, as I have some structural comments. First, I agree with your thesis. In fact, I'd argue General Aviation is stuck in the

Hopefully the author is reading this, as I have some structural comments. First, I agree with your thesis. In fact, I'd argue General Aviation is stuck in the 1950s. Lots of reasons for that, including the cost of insurance. Second, I had a hard time reading this, as you seem to lack the ability to form cohesive paragraphs. Very sorry to have to tell you, but I figured somebody should. Nobody can read a big wall of text where each paragraph is trying to say several different things at the same time. Best of luck in future drafts.