It's not the idea that's bad, it's the prose. It's the danger from leaning too closely on the press release—a good journo's job is to make sense of stuff, not

It's not the idea that's bad, it's the prose. It's the danger from leaning too closely on the press release—a good journo's job is to make sense of stuff, not add to the cruft. The headline is as clear as mud; it needs a good editor.