I scrolled through it and would offer the following comments: As someone who doesn't know you and doesn't place a whole lot of value in self-judgments (in the

I scrolled through it and would offer the following comments: As someone who doesn't know you and doesn't place a whole lot of value in self-judgments (in the abstract), I was far more interested in your portfolio and resume than I was in the 10-item "Why me?" list. However, having to click to go somewhere else to see your portfolio was off-putting -- that's the only thing that's not in-line. I think it would be more powerful if your portfolio (or selected great bits) were visible right then and there. Additionally, I think that 10 things for "why me" made the list a bit long. A lot of them could be shown (rather than told) elsewhere in your presentation, especially through your portfolio.