Looks good in general, here are some potential improvements: * You can safely drop "I'm a conversion optimization consultant." The sentence that follows is mor

Looks good in general, here are some potential improvements: * You can safely drop "I'm a conversion optimization consultant." The sentence that follows is more powerful and easier to understand. * "How I can help." – titles should not end in periods. This one as well as "Happy clients." can optionally end with a colon. There are a couple places in the text where punctuation is also incorrect, you should re-check it against English rules. * "Conversion Optimization" should be to the left of "Funnel Tracking & Analysis" because it's simpler, IMHO. * The bullets under "Funnel Tracking & Analysis" don't really say much about how it brings money, just what it is. * On Chrome in OS X with standard settings, "Funnel Tracking & Analysis" is split into two lines. Layout looks a bit broken because of that. * "How can I help?" assumes that the client knows the answer to that question. Don't intimidate them, either drop or rephrase this. * Why no email? You can add it using javascript, and the vast majority of spam bots won't see it (google how to do that properly).