Is your point here that cramming extra adverbs into one's writing just for their own sake is poor style? That's what your example seems to illustrate, and I emp

Is your point here that cramming extra adverbs into one's writing just for their own sake is poor style? That's what your example seems to illustrate, and I emphatically agree. But when adverbs come up naturally in expressing an idea, I'd hate to suggest to anyone that it's a bad thing!