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> You know what's fun? Pasting in text from Ernest Hemingway and seeing what he did wrong. I was thinking about giving some Joyce a pass through this...
by jimmcslim 13y ago
> You know what's fun? Pasting in text from Ernest Hemingway and seeing what he did wrong.
I was thinking about giving some Joyce a pass through this...
- makr17 13y agoI pasted the text of the Declaration of Independence. Boy was that fun... 9 of 46 sentences are hard to read. 19 of 46 sentences are very hard to read. 12 adverbs. Aim for 11 or less. 8 words or phrases can be simpler. 12 uses of passive voice. Aim for 9 or less.