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Ask HN: Feedback on my first deck
https://www.dropbox.com/s/h418tltlwtartmy/deck.pdf
I've never made a deck before, and I'm not sure if this is what it's supposed to be like. I've read through lots of advice (ex. from Venture Hacks), but still feel unsure.
The main thing is that I feel like I'm making a bunch of claims, but not supporting them with arguments and evidence. However, if I try to provide arguments/evidence, it'll get too wordy, and all the advice I read says to keep it really short.
Am I not providing enough evidence? Other thoughts?
- tmetzner 13y agoTwo quick thoughts: 1. still fairly wordy on several slides (I know, it's REALLY hard to whittle down more) 2. you only hint at how you might make money: biz model should be very clear (you do a good job explaining how you'll spend $, but not make $)
- adamzerner 13y agoThanks for your thoughts! I'll work on improving those 2 things.