There's too much competing text, IMHO. Focus more on the message and photo. And it's really bad to have a big sign-up box that pops up before I've got a chance

There's too much competing text, IMHO. Focus more on the message and photo. And it's really bad to have a big sign-up box that pops up before I've got a chance to let the inspirational message sink in. That just makes me want to leave immediately.