I love the project but I don't think you capture the value proposition effectively in your sales copy. My feeling is that if I keep asking myself how does this

I love the project but I don't think you capture the value proposition effectively in your sales copy. My feeling is that if I keep asking myself how does this justify the cost then you didnt sell me on the value, you sold me on the feature set. I also think the value is probably working with organizations that are political in nature because they'll want their base to use this. Honestly, the design is fine.