I had to look at your past submissions to work out what Kickstarter project you were talking about. To my surprise I had actually backed you guys (I wanted to u

I had to look at your past submissions to work out what Kickstarter project you were talking about. To my surprise I had actually backed you guys (I wanted to use VMX w/ my Ninja Blocks). My tips for you: - Your video is way too long! 7 minutes! If your video is over 2-2.30mins it's too long! - When you use a simple, coherent story, you make it more likely that people will make a decision or take an action. - On that note, there was no really strong call to action at the end of the video. - If you're selling to men (and sadly lets face it you mostly are), your call to action should be done by a woman. - There is way too much text. - Rewards tiers are too complex. There needs to be a clear "you should buy this one". Each reward tier description is itself a little essay! - "VMX Project" isn't a good name. What does VMX mean? It's not memorable. I don't think that 'project' is a positive word. It's the kind of word you'd associate with a charity or shaky cause. - You need to partner up more. There are other past kickstarter projects that could work really well with your offering. - There aren't really any social proof points that I can pick up by skimming the page. - There's no scarcity. Why should I convert? - You need to show the novelty. How does it differ from other similar but different products like Simple/Open CV etc. - Going back to social proof, you don't have any media or quotes! Just my 2c :-) Please repost your project. It's really quite awesome, it just needs to be marketed better!