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I have a grumpy but well founded objection. This may indeed be a very useful guide to tensors, perhaps for people who have worked with them without a strong ba
by escape_goat 13y ago
I have a grumpy but well founded objection.
This may indeed be a very useful guide to tensors, perhaps for people who have worked with them without a strong background understanding.
I don't want to detract from that, or from the author's thorough and sincere effort to provide tutelage to the world at large, for free, in a wide variety of mathematical subjects; he seems to have written hundreds of blog posts like this one.
However, I don't think that it is in any way about conquering any such thing as 'Tensorphobia', and if it was intended to be "significantly friendly so as not to make anybody run in fear," this effort is going to fail. I do not think that it was; I think there is an (quite innocent) dishonesty to the claim, and I feel like calling this out.
The language used contains typical signals of the sort of para-academic elitism parodied in 'Fraiser', starting with the use of the uncommon word 'jest' in the first full sentence and continuing with the adoption of "we" and the scattering of various tofferies throughout remainder of the text.
I was quite annoyed by this until I looked at the author's bio page, whereupon I thought, okay, perhaps for him this feels like his natural voice. Making the grade is one of his things, and he has in fact made the grade repeatedly and excessively, and he is young enough that there hasn’t really been much time for him to reflect on this much.
He's enthusiastic about teaching, which is a rare gem of a quality amongst the professoriate. So do not be crabby, you old substandard goat, who can barely add two to two without the crutch of an operator.
Okay.
However, the author's audience is much narrower -- he is making it much narrower -- than he may realize. He is writing for a person like himself, and he is, in a somewhat standard manner, offering the subject by way of little tests of the intellect, couched in suggestions of superiority.
This is wonderful fare for a student who's sense of self-worth is founded on the suggestion that they are more clever than the others; it is neither food nor balm for the rest of the anyones who might have cause or need to seek a more general understanding of tensors.
What I take exception to is that presenting the subject in this style while claiming to speak to the rest of the anyones will tend to reaffirm 'tensorphobia' for such people, essentially gaslighting them; this is not helpful. It is a distinct harm.
I remember realizing, in my first year of university, that a person of ‘general’ (low) intelligence would in fact be entirely capable of understanding the proof of the derivative, if it was taught to them properly. Everyone routinely understands more complicated things. The true barrier would be their indifference; they would have no use for such understanding. But otherwise the failure would not be on the part of the student; it would be on the part of the teacher.
I am not suggesting the same of tensors; perhaps I myself lack some quality that is needed to understand them. But I recognize the language that is being used here, and it has an easily comprehensible and distinct meaning that has nothing to do with tensors.
I think the author is doing wonderful and useful work, but I think he should reflect long and hard on his rhetorical affectations.
- justinpombrio 13y agoThis article was not written for a layperson; it was written for someone who had taken college-level math classes and has a more-than-casual interest in math, but had until now been put off by overly-technical (read: very very technical) descriptions of tensors. I fall precisely into this category, and enjoyed the article. I found the tone and phrasing of the article quite natural, but as an academic I realize the wording might sound unnatural to others. You must have a very poor impression of academics if you found the language of this article offensive. What's wrong with the word jest? If he isn't allowed to say 'jest', why do you get away with 'para-academic elitism' and 'rhetorical affectations'? Also, I realize that saying "we" might sound strange, but I didn't know it could offend. (It's not a royal 'we'; it refers to 'you and I', FWIW.) What's a tofferie, by the way?
- lmz 13y ago> What's a tofferie, by the way? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Toff http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Toff
- tedsanders 13y agoFor what it's worth, I enjoyed the article. I've used tensors a little bit, but I remain uncomfortable with them. Perhaps I'm exactly the audience you were targeting. :)
- escape_goat 13y agoIt's not a question of the word "jest" having anything wrong with it, and I think you mistake my point somewhat if your impression was that I was offended by the author’s rhetoric. In North America, one does not hear the word “jest” that often. It is a perfectly decent word, but it is also — along with other turns of phrase employed here — symptomatic of a particular discourse that makes assertions regarding social order and fundamental power relationships between humans. My objection is not to the author’s rhetoric. My objection is that the article suggests it will help the reader conquer the ‘fear’ of tensors while still using language that confronts the reader with an anxious situation. He is bluntly interpolating an elite — those with a notion of belonging to an elite — and presenting material as a test of membership in that category. This is a good way to teach smart kids who are strongly motivated by the notion of belonging to a high(er) ranking peer group. (In the short term, at least.) It is a very, very bad way to teach anyone who has learned, consistently, that this language specifically disincludes them, and it is bad enough when it comes to teaching those who have learned that they are not, in fact, a member of any sort of intellectual elite. “Tofferie” is a (probably misspelt) inferred word; that is, there is no such word, but its meaning is readily deducible. A “toff” is a person who displays mannerisms associated with wealth and status; the usage of this word in the North American context would be an example of the sort of signalling I am talking about. I’ve met professors, both associate and full, in various social contexts; I probably have a very ordinary (or even mundane) impression of academics.