...I'm not a designer, I quickly put this together last night, and I'm looking for some feedback. It's for a sitebuilder and it's just to get users that want t

...I'm not a designer, I quickly put this together last night, and I'm looking for some feedback. It's for a sitebuilder and it's just to get users that want to try the beta. Does it work at all? How could it be improved? Any help appreciated. Thanks!