Unfiltered 20 minute feedback with random things that come to mind. Use or ignore as you like: Landing page needs examples right in my face. I thought they wou

Unfiltered 20 minute feedback with random things that come to mind. Use or ignore as you like: Landing page needs examples right in my face. I thought they would come when clicking "Next". Don't make me search them. Website pushes ALL content below the fold on a 1024x600 screen. Resumes would look a lot better with good font choices!!!(!!!!!) Be careful relying on color. Up to 8% of men have some sort of color vision impairment! Webdev: Is too busy for me too. It looks crammed. I'd say half the amount of text would be ok on a page. Worship the white space! I would not center the top text lines but justify them (with hyphenation if needed). Second page of webdev I don't like the color gradients. Might be personal taste. They seem muddy/dirty to me. "X University" and "National Merit" are on different vertical levels, sloppiness alert! Include the name/address on that page too, small, at footer or header. Imagine if someone accidentally mixed up many applications and has to reorganise them. I like how the maps shows the applicant moving around quite a bit. As it is a playful element, I would add tracks showing the movement (with direction indicators). :) Restaurant: I would have called it Passion, not Enthusiasm but I am not a native speaker so that might be bullshit. Passion sounds nicer to me. I like the idea with the 3 pillars/columns! Move the subtitles closer to their children, more away form their parents. That way you get clear connections. You misspelled "received". To the pit with you! I would try to end up with more space on the sides. Right now it would be weird to read when printed out I think. Student job: Again the subtitles need to be moved lower. I looked at their decorative lines for a moment wondering why someone would want to add handwritten notes/signatures there. I think you could drop the "Academics", "About me" and "Experience" titles completely! In the word cloud you could (carefully! only blues or greys!) play with color so the words get more differentiable. I'd write out the "5" as word. Phone number on top is aligned weird. Either center it on the page or between the text elements on its sides. Academics is old->new while the others are new->old? Stick with one order! ----- I've been thinking of offering this kind of feedback on demand, eg "0.x dollar per minute of unfiltered constructive feedback by a pesky perfectionist". Not sure if that would worth trying though. Open for any feedback! :)