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Yes, see, this is why writing benefits from having an editor. Facepalm. First draft: most johns are after a so-called 'shemale' Second draft (removing redund
by undoware 13y ago
Yes, see, this is why writing benefits from having an editor. Facepalm.
First draft:
most johns are after a so-called 'shemale'
Second draft (removing redundant quotes, following writing advice of Bill Zinsser)
most johns are after a so-called shemale
Third draft (shorten that sentence! Tighten it up!)
most johns are after a shemale
....Fourth draft (after walking away and coming back to my writing, suddenly hearing it): most sex-industry customers are after an MtF no-op transsexual -- a 'shemale', in the derogatory parlance of the industry.