Good post but I think it's too long relative to the target audience. If the audience is "Someone who can't be bothered to write more than two sentences", asking

Good post but I think it's too long relative to the target audience. If the audience is "Someone who can't be bothered to write more than two sentences", asking them to read 2,000 words is a bit much. I liked it though - good examples and such - but I think it would benefit from a good editor to tighten it up.