Good ideas, the wording is wrong though: >> ...to call for reforms to restore the public's trust in the internet... In Internet we trust. Abusing it is the is

Good ideas, the wording is wrong though: >> ...to call for reforms to restore the public's trust in the internet... In Internet we trust. Abusing it is the issue to deal with. >> ... have united to demand sweeping changes to US surveillance laws.. Of course but don't forget to add the statement about "enforcing" the [new and existing] laws. Otherwise it'll become like a gun control game for politicians - "lets add new laws to solve the problem".