As I commented when the link to pg writing his essay, that this story cites as an example, was submitted to Reddit: I think it [is] rather encouraging to would

As I commented when the link to pg writing his essay, that this story cites as an example, was submitted to Reddit: I think it [is] rather encouraging to would-be writers to see that someone that is [..] succesful rewrites his sentences many times. It can be quite disheartening to find it necessary to rewrite the same bit over and over again, if you suffer from the illusion that good writers pen down everything in one go.