Here's the bug, equating size with effectiveness: "a bigger resume package. A package which shows off what kind of person I am." You have, by the way, deftly i

Here's the bug, equating size with effectiveness: "a bigger resume package. A package which shows off what kind of person I am." You have, by the way, deftly identified the fix: shorter yet better. Twas Pascal who said, "I would have written a shorter letter, but I did not have the time." Take the time. Talk about your accomplishments clearly eschewing all buzzspeak. Make clear what you did. Too often I find myself reading resumes desperately panning for actual contributions. hth