First, you just launched, so congrats! Second, I do have some feedback: -You don't state the problem you're fixing. You have to make the prospect aware of a p

First, you just launched, so congrats! Second, I do have some feedback: -You don't state the problem you're fixing. You have to make the prospect aware of a problem they're having before you show them the light. And even if a prospect visits your site knowing they have the problem you're trying to solve, reiterating it in very clear terms will only make them more encouraged to buy your service. -You need visuals, like images of restaurants, dishes, happy customers, happy owners, etc, stuff that'll elicit an emotional response. -Given the nature of the product, I would include a very simple graph to visually convey the concept of increasing revenues. -You need testimonials or case studies. As a restaurant owner with a lot on my plate already, I need to know your product actually works and is worth implementing. A case study about how X restaurant discovered some hidden trends in their customer behaviors and tripled revenue in a year will make me more likely to pull the trigger. -Your hook needs work. "The best way to forecast for your restaurant" doesn't present a problem or a solution. Something like "Easy sales forecasting that'll keep your customers full, and your wallet fat" might be a little better. (That could be a lot better, but I'd need a few hours). Hope that helps!