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Hey! Cool concept. My overall comment would be really drive home the problem(s) that you're trying to solve, whatever they might be. I would lead with those. i
by geoffw8 13y ago
Hey! Cool concept.
My overall comment would be really drive home the problem(s) that you're trying to solve, whatever they might be. I would lead with those. i.e.
- Fed up of wasting perfectly good ingredients?
- Want to make smarter purchasing decisions?
- Take the guesswork out of your next specials
- etc etc
What you have at the moment is mostly the solution, I'd pitch up the problem like I mentioned above, then a few points on your products magic.
It shouldn't be too tough because even from just seeing your current page I "get it".
Just my 2 penneth :)
- fananta 13y agoThanks. I think we'll add a point to state the current pain point as you said. Really the goal is to help restaurants better understand their customers' behaviors and patterns.
- geoffw8 13y agoHey, yeah I totally get it. Just drive home the WHY, WHY do you need to help them understand their customers' behaviour patterns? What are the benefits? Honestly I can't say that enough :)