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Hey, I have some thoughts for you: - it's a bit cluttered. People don't have time to read through all the stuff to understand what the page is about. I'd make
by laurabw 13y ago
Hey, I have some thoughts for you:
- it's a bit cluttered. People don't have time to read through all the stuff to understand what the page is about. I'd make it simpler with a couple of graphics.
- If your goal is to sign up customers, you should highlight the feature and put it in the center. Also, what's the incentive for people to sign up? Give them something to be excited about.
- How long will they have to wait and what do they get after that?
- The box on the right side is a left unexplained. Might need some context or get rid of it.
- Yesterday I found a threat here for people to promote their beta launches. You might want to check it out :)
Best of luck
- BentleyDavis 13y agoThanks so much for the feedback. I have been cutting the length of the content. I'll see if I can cut some more. Maybe add some links to more information and keep them off the front page. The box to the right is a screenshot so I can label it. The features are difficult to explain so I tried to have the benefits. I'll think through it and see what I can do to make it clearer. I couldn't find the thread about promoting beta sites. If you can give me the link I would appreciate it. Thanks Again.
- laurabw 13y agoYou're welcome! This is the thread I meant: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=6488822 https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=6488822