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Hi Schapirama, I love the idea. But I have a visual problem with the page (other than the massive loading times, which you've already promised to fix): Way t
by caffeine 17y ago
Hi Schapirama,
I love the idea. But I have a visual problem with the page (other than the massive loading times, which you've already promised to fix):
Way too many fonts on that page.
The logo on the top left, the "Album of letters" script, and the "TOUR" button are all different fonts, and it's ... less than pretty :)
Get rid of the military-style "TOUR" font. Maybe tone down the crazy "from a birdie" logo ... it looks too twittery.
Also, tone down the cross-hatch on the back of the page. Nobody writes letters on corduroy pants :)
I think you should work with a graphic designer to choose a good color scheme and typography set that work. The idea is excellent and your page almost gives the "vibe" you're looking for. Seeing that page, I really wanted to write some letters: so that's a huge plus.
I like the layout of the elemnents: the "An album of letters" is intriguing, and simple "big middle box" layout works well, because it feels like a letter.