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(I upvoted you but I might have clicked the downarrow instead). On your site this phrase: "We used to have a problem with fraudulent orders." My suggestion i
by larrys 13y ago
(I upvoted you but I might have clicked the downarrow instead).
On your site this phrase:
"We used to have a problem with fraudulent orders."
My suggestion is that the following is much clearer:
"We no longer have a problem with fraudulent orders."
Also the other info I would present in a less negative way. People tend to respond better (imho and experience) to a message presented in a positive way rather than negatively.
So for example rather than:
"Fraud can kill your business" I would say:
"Reduce Fraud and Make more money".
Instead of "Stop the cycle of worry" I would say:
"Sleep at night and make more money"
etc.
Obv. there are many twists to this that's just two examples.
- svmegatron 13y agoThanks for the feedback! Those are great ideas, I will test them out!